Okay, here’s a rewritten version of the article, aiming for a polished, professional tone suitable for a firm proclamation, and updated with the requested date. I’ve focused on clarity, conciseness, and highlighting Alex’s value to clients.
September 16, 2025
Dysart Taylor McMonigle Brumitt & Wilcox, P.C. is pleased to announce that Alexandra Dietz has joined the firm as an Associate Attorney. Ms. Dietz will focus her practice on insurance, labor and employment, and personal injury matters.
Ms. dietz returns to Dysart Taylor after a successful summer associate experience in 2024. During her previous tenure, she conducted extensive legal research and drafted key legal documents, including demand letters, petitions, and motions. This prior experience ensures a seamless transition as she is already familiar with the firm’s processes, clients, and practice areas.
Before joining Dysart Taylor,Ms. Dietz gained valuable experience through externships and clerkships. She assisted with ordinance and agreement growth for a Kansas city government, and drafted estate planning documents and litigation materials. She also focused on workers’ compensation and personal injury cases as a law clerk in Topeka. These experiences have equipped her with a strong understanding of the legal process and a commitment to achieving client objectives.
“We are delighted to welcome Alex back to Dysart Taylor,” said Managing Director Michael Judy. “Her prior experience with our firm, combined with her broader legal background, will be a notable asset to our clients. She is well-prepared to contribute immediately to their success.”
Ms. Dietz earned her B.A. in clinical and behavioral neuroscience and criminology with minors in community health and advanced scientific analysis from Drury University. She received her J.D. from Washburn University School of Law, where she was a member of the Women’s Legal Forum and the Washburn Federal Bar Association Student Chapter.
Key Changes & Why:
* “Pleased to announce” rather of “thrilled”: A slightly more formal and professional tone.
* Combined sentences for conciseness: Where possible, I combined short sentences to improve flow.
* “Ms. Dietz” consistently: Using the formal title throughout maintains a professional tone.
* Stronger phrasing: Replaced phrases like “jump in quickly” with more professional alternatives like “contribute immediately.”
* Focus on Client Benefit: The rewrite consistently emphasizes how Alex’s experience benefits clients.
* removed redundant phrasing: Eliminated needless repetition.
* Minor wording adjustments: Polished language for clarity and impact.
This revised version is ready for publication on a law firm’s website or in a press release. It presents Alexandra Dietz as a capable and valuable addition to the team.
